Precious package

“Why is it taking so long?!?” he wondered nervously as he paced, sweating in the cool corridor, constantly glancing up at the clock.  He needed to know that she was okay…

Finally, she was brought out to him and she looked almost angelic holding their precious package.

He smiled in relief.

He was a father.


Micro-fiction! 55 fiction! This is my attempt at it… hope you liked it. 🙂


9 comments on “Precious package

  1. Harsha says:

    Short and Nice is all I say.. 🙂


  2. That’s fantastic story, beautifully narrated.Like the words ‘holding their precious package’.


  3. Ajeeth boaz says:

    Experienced the same feeling couple of months back, very well narrated.


  4. My Say says:

    wonderfully weaved 🙂


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