First Crush

Maya drew little hearts around their names. But, sometimes she wondered if he even knew she existed.

Mia and Maya were by the gate when he walked towards them. Her heart began to race. She allowed herself to hope.

He looked past her, asking Mia out…

Then she knew why it was called a crush.


This post is written for theΒ 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted byΒ IndiBlosp


17 comments on “First Crush

  1. jaseemafarzana says:

    Fab story mam! Loved it πŸ™‚


  2. Nice story. That even a small gesture can make a story is well depicted.


  3. aamjunta says:

    Crush πŸ™‚
    Super one…


  4. very nice wonderful feel…


  5. Khushboo says:

    Loved your little pun in the end. Well written πŸ™‚


  6. Harsha says:

    That is Nice pretty nice .. πŸ™‚


  7. My Say says:

    fabulous !! simply fabulous !! very well justified the format .


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