Born of one womb,
Separated at birth.
Brothers turned enemies
So much resentment and hurt.
Lines have been tattooed
To separate you from me;
Yet bloodshed and violence
Have peppered our story.
Perhaps it is only my foolish dream
To hope that one day all will be calm
After all this is something I often wonder,
How different is my Namaste from your Salaam?
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This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda and it got featured this week! 🙂
wow.. this is so strong and the point well made.. loved it.
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Welcome here and thank you so much! 🙂
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wonderful and clearly written
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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The climax was nothing less than a hardcore blow.. lovd it!!
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Welcome here Arish and thank you so much! 🙂
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Your strong message thru poetry is heart-warming.
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Thank you so much Kalpana 🙂
For some reason, I’m not able to comment on your blog…do you know why by any chance?
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loved the way how u integrated both namaste n salaam into it! Delivered it with a punch…
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed reading it. 🙂
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That is very well written…. Brilliant… as always!!
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Thank you so much Sir 🙂 Thanks for taking the time to comment too 😀
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a wonderful composition!
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Thankyou 🙂
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Profound words:)
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Thank you Vishal 🙂
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Nice, the idea of using a poem with both these words was quite creative…
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Thank you 🙂
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