For rain…

He’d gazed at their yellowing fields and wished they would turn green but, the sky was still blue the day before. He was giving up hope and cursed God till he was red in the face…

That morning, he awoke to thunder. Grey clouds had filled the sky.

Perhaps there was a God after all.

******

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda and it was featured again this week 😀

wowbadge

Advertisements

12 comments on “For rain…

  1. binzy says:

    Beautifully written in 55 words !!

    Like

  2. Say Cheese says:

    Wonderful post. You know, I have read several other bloggers’ take on this prompt and ‘wow’ is what escapes the mouth when I see lovely takes people have given on it. 🙂

    Like

  3. shail says:

    Good one. Maybe the curses did it.

    Like

  4. aranmolrawat says:

    Nice use of words and impressive write up 🙂

    Like

  5. This is splendid! 🙂

    Like

  6. Love ur 55-er, Preeti:)

    Like

Would love to hear what you think!

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s