Copyright Bjorn Rudberg
“Move in with me!” he’d said pointing out his place; tucked away from the rest of mankind.
“Just you, me and that breath-taking view? Of course Mr. Romantic!”
Soon romance was the last thing on her mind for with the world so far below them; no one could ever hear her scream.
That morning, the face looking back from the mirror was unrecognizable and she knew she couldn’t take it anymore. But was there
anywhere he wouldn’t find her…?
She took a breath and stepped off the edge of that beautiful mountain. He’d never be able to follow her there.
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Written for Friday Fictioneers. It’s a little dark, but, it’s what came to mind when I saw the image. You can check out the other brilliant contributions this week here.
Fuchsia Outbursts 
Reminds me of the story I wrote for FF a couple weeks ago – Flight. The desperation is awful. Well done.
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Glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks.
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Preeti, We see and read that type of sad ending far to often these days. We just hope it doesn’t happen to us or someone we’re close to. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
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Yes we do. It’s a terrible reality for too many women.
Thanks for reading Susan!
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Sad ending!! Not a fan of that! But you’ve beautifully penned! Keep writing Preeti! ❤
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I’m not a fan of sad endings either really. Glad you liked the way I wrote it! 🙂
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Such intensity Preeti. I’m loving your words and thought process!! Great one !!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Dear Preeti,
Sad story. Reality for too many.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It is Rochelle. Thanks for taking the time to read.
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“Move in with me” can be considered for some to be famous last words 😉
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They certainly were the last that mattered for her!
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I’m sure it’s a non-fiction story for many women.
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True Elizabeth. Thanks for reading!
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Tragic but powerfully expressed.
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Thanks Vishal!
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And here I was expecting romantic tale as I started 😀 The last line has the right amount of feel Preeti 🙂
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Thanks Shashank…sometimes things start romantic and take drastic turns!
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Oh no..why her? she could have pushed him off instead?!
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The thought never occured to her. It seemed to make more sense to jump herself.
Thanks for reading Uma.
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Tragic ending… 😦
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Thanks for reading my story Maniparna.
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Ohh my God…such a sad thing..but beautifully done..
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So many women like her feel they have no other choice…life is so cruel that death feels like the only escape.
Thanks Naba.
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Dark, yes, but if that’s where it takes you …
From only 100 words, I’m wishing I knew her name and some way to help her!
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There are so many women who are suffering like her….I wish we could help them all!
Thanks for reading!
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Very deep and oppressive story, well written. I enjoyed reading. Yes, he probably won’t find her in the scrub!
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Thanks and welcome to my blog Maree!
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Oh how things can change so dramatically for the worse. A sad story 😦
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Thanks for reading my story Chris.
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Locked in at the mercy of his fists.. devastating last line… and to often the truth,
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It is sadly….thanks for stopping by!
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